Words Did Not Matter

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  1. Mysty

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    Alone in the night
    my head harshly throbbing
    with neck tightly coiled,
    as if it was a snake
    waiting to strike,
    all I could think of was You.
    The hours and the days
    passed by so slowly, it seemed
    yet when I looked back
    it was time to see you again.
    Words did not matter
    as all I needed was your arms
    holding me tightly
    like you did in our beginning,
    when we were
    inseparable in our love.
    Your voice whispered soft,
    tenderness as you eased
    me into sleep,
    caressing the pain out
    so I could eternally rest.
    Quietus came calling
    and I knew it was right
    for we were meant
    not to be parted
    as long as we had.
    I didn't mind,
    once the pain was all gone,
    it meant to my heart
    that I would see you again.
    Words did not matter
    for I was with you once more,
    sacred affirmation
    never to be riven ever again.
    ©2013 Mysty Johnson
     
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  2. JONATHAN

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    This is a poignant reminder of a love I lost, it made me miss her and Ill come back to read this again when my head clears out a bit and I can think more objectively but great write.
     
  3. Mysty

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    Thank You so much Jonathan. I hope your head clears out soon. I know the feeling of losing a loved one too. Tis why I wrote this I suppose.
     
  4. MsJacquiiC

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    This is a melancholy love poem. Reminds me of Romeo & Juliet. Forever together in death.
    I suppose some loves are like that. I've a love that's like that and this piece almost made me cry thinking about him.

    J.
     
  5. Mysty

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    aww I am sorry Ms Jacquii.... I never meant anyone to cry. Yeah I have an old love like that too. I miss talking to him. : / lol such is life though.
     
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    Well... Such is life - I'll drink to that.
    But hey - Old Love..... Better to have loved and loved well for only a moment and a half, than to never have loved at all.



    [fieldset=Lyrics to Old Love by Eric Clapton]I can feel your body
    When I'm lying in bed
    There's too much confusion
    Going around through my head
    And it makes me so angry
    To know that the flame still burns
    Why can't I get over'
    When will I ever learn'

    Old Love, leave me alone
    Old love, go on home

    I can see your face
    But I know that it's not real
    It's just an illusion
    Caused by how I used to feel
    And it makes me so angry
    To know that the flame will always burn
    I'll never get over
    I know now that I'll never learn

    Old Love, leave me alone
    Old love, go on home [/fieldset]

    To have known even the one percent of what these music & lyrics are about... Makes the tears worth it. :yes:
     
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    GREAT Tune Ms Jacquii.:D
     
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    Oh yes! Gotta love Clapton.

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