This World

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  1. PaintedDiary

    PaintedDiary
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    Destruction, violence, catastrophe
    and tears,
    the homeless and wealthy
    seem to combine fears.

    This world of war, drugs, killing
    and sorrow I read,
    we have something in common,
    we all hurt
    we all bleed.

    The present is falling,
    the future is weak,
    it's the children
    we must save,
    and their obstacles,
    we must defeat.
     
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  2. MsJacquiiC

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    Hey KIM - I watched an old George Carlin comedy-set the otherday - And to say that he was a bit cynical about "children being the future..." is the most cringing understatement of the year - I think he said "Fuk the children" LOL

    I was laughing as robustly as anyone else. But then I read this poem.

    It speaks truth girl! Thanx for sharing it with us!

    Jacquii.
     
  3. erikestabrook

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    good poem kim, it was easy to understand and not very sentimental but i liked the message still
     
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