Stoned Immaculate

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  1. JONATHAN

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    The stars undercover, the moon shining shy ,
    abashed by the brilliance of our nakedness .
    Marijuana smoke like sweet smelling incense ,
    making its way to the indulgent heavens above ,
    passing through our lips like a love song of worship ,
    to a rapt audience of Gods .Yes here we are on holy ground ,
    stoned immaculate . Here we lie in this temple of love ,
    stoned immaculate .

    Like shooting stars on a burning trail destined to meet each other ,
    Exploring hands , probing lips, on this mad race to reach nirvana .
    My sweaty palms on your parched skin quenching a spiritual thirst ,
    Your hands on me , your moist lips on mine feeding a starving fire .
    You moan , I groan as you ride me on this pilgrim's path of gradually fullfilled desire.
    Oh we're getting there at the feet of God , stoned immaculate
    Now we're all spent up , by love sanctified ,
    stoned immaculate .
     
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    Oooo! Another sizzling-hot write from you Jon

    Loved this passage here. You can almost feel the lovers' intensity, such a fire that needs to be fed, as smokey wisps of reefer and incense flood the lovers' domain, their senses. Nirvana indeed. [​IMG]

    Yeah. This made for a most scintillating read. Thanks for the share!

    J.
     
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    i found the piece to be very intense i can feel the intimacy and passion you definitely brought life to the thoughts
     
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    Jon, I don't know if the picture was a true reflection of the piece. They are way to calm and the poem really brings across an intensity... sweat and slick fast movement through the piece... lol! Good one. Keep writing...

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    Thank you Ms Jacquii, Theres and Apphia ... this is an older piece that I posted just to keep active on jpic . I write quite rarely nowadays however I'm reading a lot of whats on here and I do feel the warmth of inspiration catching on and I do hope to be on here with something current soon.
     
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    Ha! I was going to say in my op that the picture was a perfect reflection of the poem. But it isn't right?
    The picture is waaaaay too sedate for the romantically fab romp depicted in the piece. So totally agree with you Ms N :yes:
    Well hmmm- perhaps the picture could have provided the opening inspiration maybe, but not a direct reflection....
     
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    Well I'm glad you posted it. It's really a nice write.

    And yeah - I'm on with you JONATHANJONATHAN as far as rarely writing nowadays... I love to read though - and JPiC has provided me my own personal poetry library of sorts. Here's hoping writers block will be soundly defeated for the duration of 2013, so that we may continue adding to our volumes of scintillating poetry. :writing:

    Happy new year you guys!
     
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    Well to be honest I spent a lot of time searching online fr a pic to go with this piece unfortunately this is all I could come up with.
     
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    My hopes fr the New Year are pretty much the same too ..
     
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    Now that I see the pic again though. It fits - but more like it's the "Prelude to Stoned Immaculate" :heat:
     
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