Release

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  1. PaintedDiary

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    Release

    Cracked is a heart
    pouring open sands of encased tears
    rotting flesh reflects a mesa
    wind chimes sound of loneliness

    Bittersweet dances from every cell
    past lives release burdens
    tomorrow I will reincarnate

    a smile
     
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    Wow Kim...... love how it circles around back to a smile : ) Awesome write.
    This is my favorite line and I loved the whole poem.


    Love ya

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  3. PaintedDiary

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    Awwww thanks Mysty for taking time to read and comment. I am very grateful. I really don't quite know what my inspiration was for this one yet..lol...however, I smiled at the end. When you have time, I have another short poem in spiritual called Silent Grace, that I would love for you to read. Thank you so much again Mysty. I really did not want the poems to go in the "unread" pile...:p

    Kim :girltender:
     
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    ... Profound hope, made me sigh !
     
  5. SuzyQ

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    ahhhh yes, Kimberly, a beautiful thought wrapped up in your poetic words.
    To me, this describes the "wanting" to let go of something painful and be able to move on.
    Those lines are why I thought that this is just about "wanting". It's always easier to say tomorrow isn't it? And like the well known phrase... "Tomorrow never comes". How very poignant.

    SuzyQ
     
  6. PaintedDiary

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    Thank you so much Jonathan and SuzyQ for taking time to read and comment on my lil poem. I appreciate the comments and poetic love. I have not written any poetry in a while, and truly miss writing. Just wishing for more poetry pleasure time in my life. Don't we all. Thank you.


    Painted Diary :girltender:
     
  7. erikestabrook

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    what a profound little package of dynamite this poem was
     
  8. zaac

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    me likey this much. isssooooo kool

    zaac...in a zany state of mind
     
  9. Ariono-jovan Labu

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    hey you... que pasa-pasa? what a dynamic treat of minimalism canvased here. had to highlight similar- sentiments with
    what a few previous artists were moved to quote,


    tomorrow I will reincarnate
    a smile."

    Yeah, i can dig that close. Hope all is well by you & you are still crafting with blessings bestowed you mana. paz-
     
  10. PaintedDiary

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    Ariono! So good to read you again my friend. Thank you for bringing this piece back to life. I have not written in a long time and my muse keeps knocking at my creative door. I am doing well and hope you are as well. I will be looking out for your work. Much love to you... :huggles:
     
  11. MsJacquiiC

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    Wow - This is a little gem of a poem Kim!

    It's refreshing to think that even after the bittersweet burdens of life tapdance on your emotions, that joy cometh in the morning; a brand new day. This piece is giving me biblical life..

    And as someone who hasn't been in the most optimistic of moods the past several weeks, this piece makes me smile. Thanks for sharing the smile my friend! :D

    J.
     
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