Reality VS. Fantasy

Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by VintageGlow, Dec 28, 2013.

  1. VintageGlow

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    I passed him in the hallway I passed her in the hallway
    He didn't look at me I couldn't look at her
    I probably disgust him She's so beautiful
    I changed my mind, and now he hates me I cant believe I lost something so perfect
    I search for him She's always there
    He probably thinks I'm annoying I cant help but smile when i look at her
    He's always around other girls I ask my other friends about her
    He's forgotten me I cant get her off my mind
    I brushed past him in the hall and he stiffened She brushed past and her touch was sweet agony
    I passed by him and my heart shattered, but only he can fix me I passed her in the hallway and my soul called out
    He hates me for her to come back
    This kills me This kills me​
    I love him I love her
     
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  2. Mysty

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    What an interesting Poem. It was an odd format but I like it. I love the line "She brushed past and her touch was sweet agony." Thank You for sharing : )
     
  3. I agree with Mysty about the format but it was a good poem. So emotional.
     
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