One World

Discussion in 'Miscellaneous' started by mistyllspoetry, May 31, 2007.

  1. mistyllspoetry

    mistyllspoetry
    Billy Corgan's Shadow
    Winter yard.
    White song.
    Window star,
    wonder, whisper.
    Sanctuary secret green
    ancient water under
    warm shade.

    Sweet time wilt sacred rose.
    Rainbow morning.
    Cry red moon, leave.
    Soft ornament wind.
    Fecund fertile tree live
    and breathe.
    Share garden ground.

    Black dark sun shine.
    Bouquet hole plant nature.
    Her pink butterfly spring
    is born.
    Color the withering vine.
    Blue sky.
    Summer bird.
    The day is ripe
    by one world.
     
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  2. Sally Roberts

    Sally Roberts
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    Misty:

    I can sum up this poem in just one word..... Breathtaking!

    Superb job!
     
  3. PaintedDiary

    PaintedDiary
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    Dear Misty,

    Sally did sum it up quite nicely. This is absolutely astounding1 The line that I keep going back to is----->

    ancient water under
    warm shade.


    That is just so beautiful. This is going into my favorites. I will be back for several more reads. :bravothanx:

    Kim
     
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