Cry

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  1. MsJacquiiC

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    Listen. I am sweet. I am kind. I'm a beautiful person inside
    and out. And I subscribe to the ideology: treat me like you
    want me to treat you. However. Openly disrespect me with your
    lipped turned up (sour cunt) as if you're a lemonade which has yet
    to be sugared...correctly. And. I. Will. Read. You. For. Filth. Leaving
    you stranded in the murky depths that is you. And you will NOT wonder
    why. For I have become a mirror (however momentarily fleeting), giving
    you what you have given me. Don't cry though. Big girls don't.

    Cry.

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    Copyright © 2012 Jacquii Cooke
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    Okay... So I felt a bit bad for becoming a HORRIBLE LOUDMOUTH BYTCH to this female who looked at me as if I were vermin, proceeding to disrespect in a most infuriatingly sordid way. Bitch! I AM NOT VERMIN! I will come up out of this car and smack the living shit out of you....Not because I'm a Bad Bytch, but because you deserve to be smacked.

    Instead though. Let's be creative in our response. Bitch. You. Have. Just. Been. Read. And thank you for having inspired a bit of poetry in the process.
     
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  2. Mysty

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    wow Ms Jacquii someone really did a number on you. I am so sorry you had to face that kind of inhumanity. Love the creative response that came out of it though. Awesome job!
     
  3. MsJacquiiC

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    Well - it was just some chick who apparently found it'd be humorous to look down through her nostrils at me. I obviously was not having it. So yeah - Got a little bit of creativity out of the experience. So I'm good LOL

    Glad you enjoyed the piece Mysty!

    J.
     
  4. Medora

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    I do not know why, but your poem makes me think of A. Van Jordan's "From."
     
  5. MsJacquiiC

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    Wow! What a compliment. I'm not sure I see the resemblance other than my overuse (unintentional I assure you lol) of prepositions. It was a quick write is me excuse LOL - I hope you enjoyed it anyway ==> thanks for the read and the poetic love :yes:

    J.

    btw - That poem "From" IS FIERCE! Loved it!
     
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