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  1. jakeminick

    jakeminick
    McGonagall's Ghost
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    When you’re not coated
    There is a lot of emotion
    Some of it spawned
    From withdraw of the night
    It floods through the nestle
    Of pillow and pester
    (The call for the wind,
    To sail out of sight)
    This is the light
    Of things left unchecked
    The dust covered ghosts
    That yawn in your wake
    This unfortunate dawn
    Of neglected perspectives
    So often comes
    When the body is wrecked
     
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  2. Mysty

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    WOW ...... have you been peeking into my mind Jakeminick? Love the WHOLE poem... I could not find just one verse I liked more than the others. They all spoke to me. Awesome write !
     
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