CINQUAIN...anyone?

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  1. tham

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    MOON GLOW
    SHADOWS FALLING
    SOFTLY ON THE NIGHTTIME
    QUIET DANCING SLOWLY ON ME
    PEACEFUL

    ---------- Post added at 06:57 AM ---------- Previous post was at 06:55 AM ----------

    SUNRISE
    TIME TO WAKE UP
    START THE DAY WITH A SMILE
    RISE AND SHINE,LET THE GAMES BEGIN
    HOPEFUL
     
  2. LE00EL

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    Ahh... where do I start, just puts me in the mind of psychology... held beliefs and perceptions about creation...most important your piece brought a vibe of simplicity to something so miraculously beautiful...always vouched for. Nice piece my good man.

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  3. Mysty

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    Parted
    lush pink to red
    lightly glossed and scented
    strawberries asking to be kissed
    her lips
     
  4. MsJacquiiC

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    Nice. Thanks for sharing the poetic love.
    Now... Might you share us your own cinquain? ;)
    Find more info about cinquain at http://jpicforum.info/threads/cinquain.666/
    Whoa - thread 666 - Who'd have thunk it :girl_devil: LOL

    J.
     
  5. MsJacquiiC

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    Oh good GAWD! So sensual. A beautiful cinquain my dear!:cloud9:
     
  6. MsJacquiiC

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    The Firefly Lights
    These things
    We seek sweetly
    Are hidden;Quite nicely
    Even. Ashes on the brink of
    Fire. Fly.
     
  7. michael

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    By By
    To dreams of you
    I love you now and time
    Will be on our side today rain
    Sunshine
     
  8. Forestdawn

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    Lightening
    Tree tops a blaze
    Billows the canopy
    Dark clouds gathering overhead
    It rains
     
  9. PaintedDiary

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    Nice Cinquain's everyone! Keep' um comin!;)
     
  10. Moonchild

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    SUMMER RHYMING CINQUAIN

    Warm Night
    Dancing fireflies
    Ballerina summer
    Beneath moonbeams and stardust skies
    Love blooms

    Cloudburst
    Sunflower beams
    Soft water renewal
    Nature’s crystalline tears redeem
    Life force

    Cricket
    Snug in your rug
    Calm summer lullaby
    Mother Nature’s friendly song bug
    Good luck

    Daybreak
    Dawn’s golden eye
    Luminous peeping Tom
    Guards her youth from a distant sky
    Day star

    © Karen Davies
     
  11. PaintedDiary

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    These are absolutely lovely Moonchild! :giftrose: I felt as if I wanted to light a fragrant candle in the middle of nature and just be still. Thank you posting!
     
  12. Moonchild

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    Thank you PaintedDiary.
    I'm so glad you enjoyed!
    This is an older one, haven't been writing much lately
    but I thought it would fit here so I posted.
     
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