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i love it full of meaning and somehow the tone give some hope that eventually u will be out of the wood.. very nice :yay:
thank you i always appreciate the comments and i will consider revising the last stanza very thought provoking comment
My heart is as restless as the sea.
Underwater earthquake-tsunami, rupture inside me.
What can I do to stop my heart from beating so...
Poetry is me.
I write about the struggles in life
and all my calamities.
The obstacles beset by and all of life's anxieties.
Or I may...
Jon this was aptly expressed i can picture the scenario i can feel the anguish very captivating piece
i found the piece to be very intense i can feel the intimacy and passion you definitely brought life to the thoughts
As lava red sunsets scorch the horizon
So too this feeling scorches my soul.
The laser beams that rip through the sky
To create an...
Thank you all for the encouragement very motivating